Fallenpaw of DuskClan

Username: DisappearingMirror

Name: Fallenpaw
Gender: Tom
Age: 6 Moons
Mother: Rosepetal
Father: Talonclaw
Siblings: Echopaw
Mate(s): N/A
Crush/Love Interest(s): N/A
Offspring: N/A
Mentor: Leopardpelt
Apprentice: N/A
Allegiance: DuskClan
Rank: Apprentice
Description: Perhaps the polar opposite of his brother, Echopaw, Fallenpaw is a tall tom, not particularly heavily built, with thin shoulders and long legs. His long, shiny, white fur-perhaps a result of his mother's MistClan blood-makes his lengthy tail stand like a banner behind him. He has large, triagular ears and a small pink nose. Big, dark blue eyes stand like jewels on his narrow face, and he always has a knowing look about him.
Personality: Fallenpaw is a calm, thoughtful tom. Many of the queens that cared for him and his brother thought that he was mature beyond his moons and that he saw more than most. Perhaps it is a result of always looking after his smaller brother. Fallenpaw is an extremely loyal friend and is perhaps one of the most diligent apprentices one could ask for. He has a deep love of swimming and the only time he slacks from his duties is to take Echopaw with him for a dip.
History: Echopaw and Fallenpaw were born the charges of all of the queens in DuskClan as their mother died giving birth. Passed between the queens, their only constant was each other. Perhaps that is why the two are so close. They were apprenticed in the same ceremony and make their nests close to each other in the apprentice den. The two love little more than each other.
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[2 Moons Old]

[Present]

Accepted.

You put 'Duskpaw' instead of 'DuskClan', so I fixed those for you.